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Desporoots · 01-23-2007, 06:34 AM

Bonjour a tous
je dois écrire une fin de roman en anglais au temps du récit. Voila donc ma prose, en espérant que quelqu'un pourra m'aider a en corriger les fautes

After having learned with television that Jack Barker had faked the elections, the queen decided to turn over to Buckingham Palace to recover her power and rule the country. Arrived at the palate, it precipitated inside and fell nose to nose with Jack. "You! You cheated to be elected! You will return give me back my power immediately to me! ", the queen exclaimed. Jack tried to protest but he was immediately cut by the queen "Because of you I had to live in misery during several months. I have to remove of Buckingham Palace and to live in a tiny apartment without my staff. I require you leave from here immediately while waiting for your lawsuit which will take place soon ", the queen says that with an contemptuous expression of revenge . Jack tried to be justified but before to have been able to pronounce one word, he was carried of force by the royal guards. Finally, the queen got back her old functions by taking of account the republican ideas to improve the living conditions of the population and tried to reduce the problems of class-riden. Jack Barker was condamned to the inegibility for life.

01-23-2007, 06:34 AM	#1 (permalink)
Desporoots Growing Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 18 Desporoots is an unknown character at this point	Demande de correction pour un texte en anglais Bonjour a tous je dois écrire une fin de roman en anglais au temps du récit. Voila donc ma prose, en espérant que quelqu'un pourra m'aider a en corriger les fautes After having learned with television that Jack Barker had faked the elections, the queen decided to turn over to Buckingham Palace to recover her power and rule the country. Arrived at the palate, it precipitated inside and fell nose to nose with Jack. "You! You cheated to be elected! You will return give me back my power immediately to me! ", the queen exclaimed. Jack tried to protest but he was immediately cut by the queen "Because of you I had to live in misery during several months. I have to remove of Buckingham Palace and to live in a tiny apartment without my staff. I require you leave from here immediately while waiting for your lawsuit which will take place soon ", the queen says that with an contemptuous expression of revenge . Jack tried to be justified but before to have been able to pronounce one word, he was carried of force by the royal guards. Finally, the queen got back her old functions by taking of account the republican ideas to improve the living conditions of the population and tried to reduce the problems of class-riden. Jack Barker was condamned to the inegibility for life.
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