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Old 10-29-2006, 08:06 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Jessica did the whole work, I just have some comments ....

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I say that we must to act for our planet
This should be : I say we must act for our planet
or: I say we have to act for our planet


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I say that we must act for our planet, and now
This is correct though I think "IMHO", it would better be ..
I say that we must act for our planet immediately.
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