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Je te souhaite joyeux Noel et bonne chance a l'ecole.
In my opinion, it is an illusion to think that everyboby is equally equipped to take up further education.
On one hand, there is a large inequality in schools in the United Kingdom and France.
In fact, in these countries there is selection is based on marks obtained at the "A Levels". Moreover there are quotas. Therefore, a few students can go to the University. These students who go to the most famous Universities are often upper class' children .
As in the UK , French students can get grants to help them pay for their studies, in fact the government suggests federal grants for most students whose parents have low incomes.But those grants are not enough to cover all the expenses, therefore, students do not have equal access to the same schools. Wealthy's students go to famous Universities, while less wealthy students go to the " public schools" .
In my opinion, rich students are prepared to study for a long time. Parents urge them to study. So they help their children all of the time and can pay teachers to help them when they don't undertand something.
Also, foreign parents who don't speak the language of the country can't help their children. These parents have often modest incomes and suggest to their children to study for only a short time so that they can work .
J'ai besoin d'un autre idée mais je le trouve pas pour exprimer la partie contre, j'ai deja eu du mal a organiser celles du dessus et la il m'en manque une, si vous pouviez m'en proposer une se serait gentil .
However, the government is trying to reduce this inequality. The government has taken measures to enable a student with low incomes to obtain federal grants or loans .